A couple. A bar. A health condition of some sort. And a small research done by a reader to understand what was going on, exactly. Mere descriptions of actions and dialogue were not enough. But the reader doesn't blame the author for her lack of perception. A detached author that seems to barely know them.A foreign in their lands.
Economy of the words. Emotions, all over the place. In silence. They have lost their names yet their presence is still felt.
"We can have the whole world.""No, we can't."